this title has not been made very clear and is very difficult to spot because it is so short, however the title has been outlined to make it more bold and to stand out. the main image of Kat Von D has been places center with the story and her name being places over her. and the information down the right hand side of her. the top left hand coner advirtises another story aith the band name besides the image. other bands are listed down the left of her but they all look very enclosed together and could be hard for the reader to read if the audience has never heard of some of the bands. i think the main image takes up to much of the room and is difficult to pull out some of the information. i also think the title looks too squashed in the right hand corner. i have included the page number of the main story so the reader doesnt have to go to the contents or look around for it.
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